Tuesday, July 1, 2008

The Shipwreck.

One day a terrible storm came. The captain, Christopher Ruff was too lazy to control the ship when it was night. A crewman named Jonas figured if no one else was going to help the captain, then he should take on the role of the captain. So he sailed the ship all the way to the new land without any stops. When they got there, the other sailors threw him out of the ship. Jonas soon realized that the other sailors he was working with were pirates.
Now he decided to work on the land he now owned. He was thinking of naming it ‘sand beach’. But first he needed to cut down some trees to build his home out of. After 3 hours, his home was ready. It looked like a simple log cabin, but if you looked inside, it looked like it would be a three million dollar house. After he built his house, he hunted for food. All he could find was 10 fish, 1 coconut, and 2 mangos.

After his breakfast, he started working on this little cart that could float on water and has paddles. That took him 1 hour to build. He then tested it. What a waste of trees! It did not even stay up 1 second! Then he tried again. This time he overlapped the logs just to make sure that it did not sink. There’s only one problem. It floated only for 5 minutes. England is his home, and it takes a lot more time than 5 minutes to reach there.

So he started again. But first he needed to get some rest. But after his rest, it was already 6:00 in the evening. So he decided to find dinner. This time he found 1 loaf of bread but he cut it into 20 pieces but he only ate one and saved the rest.

The next day, he thought of a perfect idea to make the cart float: balloons! He remembered he had some in his survival kit. It might sound like a crazy idea, but it actually worked. His dad thought of the idea. That invention actually saved lives. And because of that, his father is a very famous person in England.

So he took all the balloons inside the kit. He put 4 balloons up .the rest are there in case some balloons pop. So now he built it again and it floated! After he built it, he took some food and put it in the cart in case he got hungry.

And then he sailed off. When he reached the middle of his journey, it began to rain. So the balloons popped and the cart sank and he died. And of course, the pirates got arrested for throwing Jonas out into a deserted island.

3 comments:

planetregin said...

That's an interesting story! Though the ending is a bit sad. Good job!

Mr. Movie Critic said...
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Mr. Movie Critic said...

good story